HELP! the expression (1 Viewer)

[isaacsohny]

I came to Australia few years ago so i'm not good at english..
When i write an essay, all comments says the expressions are let me down...

How can i write a good essay with good expressions?

what kind of expression are there?

Please Help...

 

[Saintlexical]

Perhaps you could post part of an essay you have written?

 

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Read books, articles with a dictionary & thesaurus, for your language.

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[GimmeUAI]

Lol Isaac Sohn, you're a legend.

Its James Hawes brother! You're the coolest Korean kid ever haha