Help with the essay introduction (2 Viewers)

[Aerath]

Pretty crap introduction. I made the whole thing up.

Way to make everyone feel bad.
What ranks did you get for English?

Therefore, through critically analysing the [collage], the responder is able to synthesis, a subjective interpretation of [The Departed] and demonstrate an understanding of the relevance of [The Departed] to their own context in society.

But I (think I) found a mistake in your thing. Synthesise perhaps?

 

[Aplus]

Way to make everyone feel bad.
What ranks did you get for English?



But I (think I) found a mistake in your thing. Synthesise perhaps?

Fixed it. And I haven't received ranks for English as of yet.

 

[lyounamu]

Thanks for all the help. Ciao

 

[Aplus]

Thanks for all the help. Ciao

It's worthwhile helping you because you help so many people