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[kangling]

I need to write a story based on a pearson's(for 16years old children and their family) trip to australia, like how they come, and live.....
how hard is for the children etc
so how can I start my topic sentence, which can makes it more interesting

 

[Lolly_Polly]

1st person or 3rd?

 

[kangling]

3rd

 

[cunliffe]

Although the boat was being buffeted on all sides by wind and the raging water, its occupants were strangely silent, patiently waiting for what now seemed inevitable.

Make them an Afghan family on a boat off Christmas Island-their experience of Australia is a detention centre...