Lee waited for the phone to ring.. (1 Viewer)

[neon766]

LOL! my story developed into Lee getting turned down for a job at macca's =\.

 

[gella]

mine, in a nutshell, was:

lee's parents were on holidays in israel
they both got shot in the head by extremists..dunno what kind of extremists, but they were extreme yes i generalised a lot in this part
then he was waiting for a phonecall from 'israel hospital' to find out how they were
he got a call from dr kahn saying the bullets were removed and they were fine, then dr kahn hung up
then lee fainted
then he woke up and it was all a dream. hahaha
yes i was pressed for time

 

[neon766]

mine, in a nutshell, was:

lee's parents were on holidays in israel
they both got shot in the head by extremists..dunno what kind of extremists, but they were extreme yes i generalised a lot in this part
then he was waiting for a phonecall from 'israel hospital' to find out how they were
he got a call from dr kahn saying the bullets were removed and they were fine, then dr kahn hung up
then lee fainted
then he woke up and it was all a dream. hahaha
yes i was pressed for time

do you by any chance go to all saints?

yeah i rushed my shit too haha.. the only dialogue in my story was 'Mum! get me some water!'

=|

 

[gella]

nuh, good samaritan you?
yeah, my ending was so..lame? haha

 

[neon766]

nuh, good samaritan you?
yeah, my ending was so..lame? haha

hahah so you know Dastin?

lololol i go to mt. carmel in Campbelltown

lol my ending was the starting sentence.. tried to pull of one of those witty endings.. didnt think it worked.. oh well

well yeah Dastin is like one of my best mates not really but yeah.. we're cool

 

[Dylan!!!]

my teachers always said tht the one thing u dnt write in your story is waking up from a dream :|

 

[theEXIT]

Basically mine was
Lee waits for his gf to call
paces arounf the house
the phone rings.
its a telemarketer
he wants to call her but doesnt; thinks he sounds desperate
gets a text saying HELP from gf
drives to her house
knocks the door in, is confonted by guy on steroids with hammer
proceeds to punch him in throat
goes to girlfriedns bedroom and hugs her
she pulls out a knife and stabs him
the end.

 

[brock-mc]

I think that most people used the 'Lee waited for the phone to ring'.

 

[neon766]

Basically mine was
Lee waits for his gf to call
paces arounf the house
the phone rings.
its a telemarketer
he wants to call her but doesnt; thinks he sounds desperate
gets a text saying HELP from gf
drives to her house
knocks the door in, is confonted by guy on steroids with hammer
proceeds to punch him in throat
goes to girlfriedns bedroom and hugs her
she pulls out a knife and stabs him
the end.

lol. 0.0

evil much? dw its still cool. but wow. throat stabbing... i diggz

 

[gella]

HAHAHA yeah i know dastin, he's in most of my classes! lol small world jeez

 

[AnthonyPhoenix]

I put the high wall and iron bars one.

 

[neon766]

HAHAHA yeah i know dastin, he's in most of my classes! lol small world jeez

hahah i reckon ayye.. yeah ask him tomorrow if he knows dillon.. he'll have some good stories about me.. lol. very very small world

 

[theEXIT]

I put the high wall and iron bars one.

LOTS of people in my school put the iron bars or the dark street one.

 

[Huynsta.]

My Lee turned out to be a hired assassin :L

 

[speedofsound]

nuh, good samaritan you?
yeah, my ending was so..lame? haha

At least yours didn't end with "and they were dead."

 

[inconnuBubble]

nah, no one feel bad..
mine ended with the protagonist somehow turning into wood..T_T

 

[Jusskah]

Mine was about how he was waiting for his imaginary friend to call... ahe. He was in love with his imaginary friend called Nobody. That sounds quite horrible in hindsight...

 

[inconnuBubble]

Mine was about how he was waiting for his imaginary friend to call... ahe. He was in love with his imaginary friend called Nobody. That sounds quite horrible in hindsight...

thats coool!!!
in a weird way
id be concerned
go see a councellor

 

[Jusskah]

Hahah, I'll just imagine that I saw a counsellor~

 

[aahmanreyy]

lol i was halfway through mine...wen the old, wrinkly person runnin the exam came and stopped me from writing
ARGH lol!