My own monologue. plz read (1 Viewer)

[i-love-maynard]

Hey, we're doin our individual projects soon. I've chosen monologue and I wrote this myself. It is based on the story Of Mice and Men, using some quotes. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!!

 

[samwise1]

I like it,
I thought it was very well written. Just a frew questions
- Setting, time and place
- what happend to lenny?

 

[Absolutezero]

My main suggestion is that since your portraying your character, it is important you have more focus on them. Don't retell the story of another, live and recreate your own. Character, that's where its at.

 

[kiannafirerose]

the charecter that is telling the story killed lenny. its there if u read it right, thatis why he's asking for forgiveness.
i think that its reallly good, but is it long enough?

 

[SpoonSamba]

I really like it! good luck to ya