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Re: related texts for RAW
I'm currently using the film Gridion Gang
I'm currently using the film Gridion Gang
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Re: related texts for RAW
Prison of Society
Gattacha
Are some really good ones
Prison of Society
Gattacha
Are some really good ones
stuff on raw- could be useful...
The novel RAW, by Scott Monk, intended for young adults, clearly informs the responder of the effects institutionalisation has on an individual. The text reveals the impacts it encompasses on the behaviours of those who are placed in institutions. A definition of an institution could be “an organisational pattern of group behaviour established, and usually accepted as a fundamental part of a culture”, therefore; the institutions refer to a psychological condition which has been brought about due to a depersonalised environment. Automatic behaviours often occur as a result of institutionalization, such as, expressionless faces, along with a general apathy. Their personal appearances, as well as personal morals become less important. Institutionalisation is likely to surface, if the residence in which their identities, interests and strengths are not respected. There are several types of institutions such as, Education systems, Legal systems, Economic systems, along with Health and Social Culture systems, to name a few.
When Brett first enters the farm, his previous experiences and non-conforming behaviour results in him stealing from an inmate. In one instance, the character of Josh demonstrates to the responder that institutionalisation can indeed be a positive experience. Josh’s positive compliance has allowed him to develop such skills, thus causing him to stay on the Farm, to learn more from Sam. The reason for this is to give superfluous insight at what the institution is really like. From this it has been made clear that Brett must face the consequences that his actions have brought about. On the other hand, Brett’s relationship with Sam grows, leading him realise “the old bloke was alright”. For Brett on the other hand, his time at the Farm has been negative, having no effect on his behaviour. More so, the manifested pressure caused while on is institutionalised. All these mentions texts can be segmented into Compliance, Protest, and enforcement. For some, the experiences faced while in an institution can be positive, while others, negative. This movie also depicts the behaviours which institutionalisation brings. Co-incidentally, this occurs just as Brett has decided to “start again” as an alternative of ending up in another detention facility, which the farm represents. Towards the end of the text, Brett Dalton’s experiences have again proved to be useless in regards to his behaviours, as he again steals.
this s useful... and good luck 2 all!
The novel RAW, by Scott Monk, intended for young adults, clearly informs the responder of the effects institutionalisation has on an individual. The text reveals the impacts it encompasses on the behaviours of those who are placed in institutions. A definition of an institution could be “an organisational pattern of group behaviour established, and usually accepted as a fundamental part of a culture”, therefore; the institutions refer to a psychological condition which has been brought about due to a depersonalised environment. Automatic behaviours often occur as a result of institutionalization, such as, expressionless faces, along with a general apathy. Their personal appearances, as well as personal morals become less important. Institutionalisation is likely to surface, if the residence in which their identities, interests and strengths are not respected. There are several types of institutions such as, Education systems, Legal systems, Economic systems, along with Health and Social Culture systems, to name a few.
When Brett first enters the farm, his previous experiences and non-conforming behaviour results in him stealing from an inmate. In one instance, the character of Josh demonstrates to the responder that institutionalisation can indeed be a positive experience. Josh’s positive compliance has allowed him to develop such skills, thus causing him to stay on the Farm, to learn more from Sam. The reason for this is to give superfluous insight at what the institution is really like. From this it has been made clear that Brett must face the consequences that his actions have brought about. On the other hand, Brett’s relationship with Sam grows, leading him realise “the old bloke was alright”. For Brett on the other hand, his time at the Farm has been negative, having no effect on his behaviour. More so, the manifested pressure caused while on is institutionalised. All these mentions texts can be segmented into Compliance, Protest, and enforcement. For some, the experiences faced while in an institution can be positive, while others, negative. This movie also depicts the behaviours which institutionalisation brings. Co-incidentally, this occurs just as Brett has decided to “start again” as an alternative of ending up in another detention facility, which the farm represents. Towards the end of the text, Brett Dalton’s experiences have again proved to be useless in regards to his behaviours, as he again steals.
this s useful... and good luck 2 all!
RAW Related Stuff
all the raw things up are all from last year so basically the people who were posting on it are no longer posting due to, they have finished the HSC and no longger need this site. i thought if u wanted help with it everyone for HSC 2008 should post in here. so use this if u need to, ask questions and people will get back to you as soon as possible.
MY ORTs for the RAW essay are:
-Welcome Home (santarium) by METALLICA - Lyrics
-Shawshank Redemption - Film
just post a lot fo others, and some of your draft essays if u wish, so we can all get ideas and it will help everyone with the RAW essay.. Thank you all
all the raw things up are all from last year so basically the people who were posting on it are no longer posting due to, they have finished the HSC and no longger need this site. i thought if u wanted help with it everyone for HSC 2008 should post in here. so use this if u need to, ask questions and people will get back to you as soon as possible.
MY ORTs for the RAW essay are:
-Welcome Home (santarium) by METALLICA - Lyrics
-Shawshank Redemption - Film
just post a lot fo others, and some of your draft essays if u wish, so we can all get ideas and it will help everyone with the RAW essay.. Thank you all
Re: RAW Related Stuff
Here are those things i said ill upload. I will look through the other threads to find more for you all, so yeah just keep an eye out in this thread...but do not plagiarise cause teachers only need to google search any bit of the part u plagiarise and they can see if you did do some plagiarism
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here is a list of related texts. as you should see its not complete. i will finish later at home (at school):
Movies:
Shawshank Redemption
Sleepers
Holes
One flew over the cuckoo's nest
Rabbit proof fence
Green mile
Gridion Gang
scales of justice
Novels:
Sleepers
Concrete box short story by Hyllus Maris
To kill a mocking bird
Poems:
The hospital by grath wehrfritz
Articles:
Schapelle Corby news articles
Lyrics:
welcome home - metallica
If you want a Download version, here it is for you:
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As i write up more related material, i will edit the Download version and Upload a new one. As Easy as a couple of minutes of my time.
here is a list of related texts. as you should see its not complete. i will finish later at home (at school):
Movies:
Shawshank Redemption
Sleepers
Holes
One flew over the cuckoo's nest
Rabbit proof fence
Green mile
Gridion Gang
scales of justice
Novels:
Sleepers
Concrete box short story by Hyllus Maris
To kill a mocking bird
Poems:
The hospital by grath wehrfritz
Articles:
Schapelle Corby news articles
Lyrics:
welcome home - metallica
If you want a Download version, here it is for you:
View attachment 16235
As i write up more related material, i will edit the Download version and Upload a new one. As Easy as a couple of minutes of my time.
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Extra Notes you should download and use, but do not plagiarise cause teachers only need to google search any bit of the part u plagiarise and they can see if you did do some plagiarism.
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Extra Notes you should download and use, but do not plagiarise cause teachers only need to google search any bit of the part u plagiarise and they can see if you did do some plagiarism.
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hay guys !
im using a documentry called "the homies", 4 corners ! & Brewbaker, movie .
The problem with using shawshank is that sooo many of you guys are doing it and the markers will be reading one after the other .. & it will become repetive!
my advice .. try do an additional source that isnt too common!
using shawshank your going to have to justify ur answers really really well !
Goodluck =)
hay guys !
im using a documentry called "the homies", 4 corners ! & Brewbaker, movie .
The problem with using shawshank is that sooo many of you guys are doing it and the markers will be reading one after the other .. & it will become repetive!
my advice .. try do an additional source that isnt too common!
using shawshank your going to have to justify ur answers really really well !
Goodluck =)
I am really bad at english!! can someone please help me!!
heres the question:
"Often what an institution perceives as ‘beneficial’, the individual may have an alternate or even opposite point of view. Write an essay exploring this idea by referring to your prescribed text and two related texts of your choosing.
Your prescribed text is Raw by Scott Monk
Please note: Other texts of your own choosing must be related texts you have not studied in class. Length (1500 words - 2000 words)"
Thanks!!
heres the question:
"Often what an institution perceives as ‘beneficial’, the individual may have an alternate or even opposite point of view. Write an essay exploring this idea by referring to your prescribed text and two related texts of your choosing.
Your prescribed text is Raw by Scott Monk
Please note: Other texts of your own choosing must be related texts you have not studied in class. Length (1500 words - 2000 words)"
Thanks!!
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Cheers
cheers that poem was really helpful.allanataylor said:
Cheers
Re: RAW Related Stuff
hay i just noticed your list of sup texts and was just woundering if any of them have positive affects on the people institutionalised? i am trying to get a negative ( one who flew over the cookoo's nest or schappelle corby) both (raw) and a positive one
hay i just noticed your list of sup texts and was just woundering if any of them have positive affects on the people institutionalised? i am trying to get a negative ( one who flew over the cookoo's nest or schappelle corby) both (raw) and a positive one