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Hey Guys :)

http://truconcept.net/

Thats my new web design website, I have received some feedback telling me the wording of its not the best, anyone have any suggestions on changes to the paragraphs etc?

Thanks :)
 

hollyy.

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Whether you need a small business website or an enterprise portal, finding the right web design services with high-quality, professional website developers and web page designers, can feel like a daunting task.
 

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Whether you need a small business website or an enterprise portal, finding the right web design services with high-quality, professional website developers and web page designers, can feel like a daunting task.
Thanks :)

Cant believe i missed that :D
 

Eddy Q

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It's very simple and straight to the point. Was that what you wanted?
 

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'Acepting' is actually spelt Accepting. Other than that it's good :)
 

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Looks good. You should put up samples of your work so that people know what they're spending money on.

I just put your site through the W3 validator & you have 9 errors. Fix that up before you claim that
All websites designed by TruConcept are constructed with valid HTML and meet today's industry Web Standards, this ensures you have a fully functional site.
I suggest you use CSS Sprites to reduce the time it takes to load the page.
 

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You might not want to say that your sites are constructed with HTML5, HTML5 != XHTML
Remove the </a> on Line 57 and you might want to remove the </p> on line 202.
Then you will have a valid XHTML document
 

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