Section 2 - Creative Writing (3 Viewers)

[ajaxandacme]

I used both quotes and underlined them for the 60 year olds to pick out easily
Though this was probably my worst section and i can't really tell how i went because it depends on what type of marker i get. Hopefully 12+ though

Didn't they say to only use 1?

 

[ekoolish]

Didn't they say to only use 1?

Yeah but now i have the opportunity to get 30/15 since i used both. Lol, i just used two just in case my first one didn't link in as well as the markers like.

 

[SophJI]

My story was full on bs

it was about a girl who has
[FONT=바탕]Anorexia[/FONT]
[FONT=바탕]and goes back in time to her childhood where she was bullied and how it was developed through rejection[/FONT]
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[FONT=바탕]such a corny story[/FONT]
[FONT=바탕]im expecting the lowest mark for this section haha[/FONT]

 

[themerald]

... 2 pages thanks to doin 2 related texts and havin an inflated essay. fml

yeah mine was only four pages for same reason. damn that two related texts

 

[greenie1113]

No more belonging!!!

 

[aeiss]

didn't like it, was annoying to integrate

 

[istudy]

Hey we didnt had to use the quote in our piece right? Just relate it

Overral i think did really well.
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[Freeba]

glad its OVER!!
yea creative went alright. can't say the same for other questions though :|

 

[Phoenix Fury]

Just relate thank christ

 

[mynamewastaken9]

1st quote.
Pumped the crap out of it, 14-15. Hopefully make up for the TWO related text in the extended respose (rookie error)

 

[clintmyster]

Did you guys just write the quote at the top of the page or something like "quote 2" ? I was a bit annoyed at the stimulus as whilst I had quite a few elements that related to relationships, it sort of shifted the focus away from the actual theme I was trying to convey in the creative. That being said at least it was a story and not an article or something. Time to expect the worst for modules.

 

[tjo176]

What do you guys think about celebrates the way relationships provide belonging?

My stories is about a married couple so it showed that, but the wife didnt want to belong to him, a man. So it was negative aspects of belonging in a relationship.

Does celebrate neccesarily mean you have to show the positive aspects of belonging in a relationship? Some of my teachers didn't seem to think so but some of the posts indicate otherwise?.

 

[zaefr]

yea i agree stimuli was a bit whack, nonetheless i just modified a key quote in mine to suit the first one.

 

[Venom.]

Could you talk about relationship with a place? Because I totes just chucked in my memorised creative about the Israel/Palestine conflict.

 

[spoonbender]

....celebrate? I thought I did alright until I came into this thread and saw that the word CELEBRATE was in the question!! *dies*

 

[emma211]

I basically wrote my prepared response and just linked it to the stimulus at the end. haha fuck that "celebrating relationships" crap

 

[SSRabbitohs2009]

I think that the question was extremely stupid as it said "celebrating relationships". I would think would have written stories that had to do with "not belonging".
So, I the relationships bit fit with my story, but the "celebrating" part didn't. Obviously, the BOS are after some cliche stories this year.

Stupid paper allround.

 

[Freckles14]

Hey we didnt had to use the quote in our piece right? Just relate it ​

Yep, just refer to the ideas or something. I referred to both since I couldn't decide which to use and they were more or less the same anyway for the purposes of the story I made up pretty much on the spot. ​

 

[SSRabbitohs2009]

Could you talk about relationship with a place? Because I totes just chucked in my memorised creative about the Israel/Palestine conflict.

Well, I had relationships to a person and a place.
So, I would think so. Because most of the comprehension section was about "home" and place.

 

[rokkuguhyo]

....celebrate? I thought I did alright until I came into this thread and saw that the word CELEBRATE was in the question!! *dies*

I didn't see the word "celebrate" either
Should have read the question more thoroughly.