Swizzle's Love Thread - Post anonymous messages to your secret crush (1 Viewer)

[OzKo]

judging by your responses


i have achieved what i set out to... achieve

thank you for your valuable input

you may read that in a more polished form in a book in a couple of year's time - including a further 250 word digression on "if my number one secret crush and i would ever work out, and a discussion of the issues therein" and a further 200 words on how her boyfriend is a terrible person - because I feel the beginning could be stronger with more venom in the words to set up a greater contrast for the latter sections

and that would bring it to exactly 2000 words

Preview please.

 

[Shadowdude]

Preview please.

How did you like the first 1550 words?

Tear-jerking or... what



Personally I think it's very emotionally moving.

 

[OzKo]

How did you like the first 1550 words?

Tear-jerking or... what



Personally I think it's very emotionally moving.

I'll need more to judge.

 

[Shadowdude]

m8, 1550 words is enough

whole short stories are shorter

 

[OzKo]

m8, 1550 words is enough

whole short stories are shorter

It's not enough for me.

 

[Shadowdude]

m8

i poured my heart out

 

[OzKo]

m8

i poured my heart out

You don't have enough heart for me I'm afraid.

 

[Shadowdude]

Yeah because it's broken and that's why i had heart surgery okay

 

[slyhunter]

 

[OzKo]

Indeed it did.

 

[someonehomebush]

lol Shadowdude You're putting girls on pedestals.

 

[townie]

lol Shadowdude You're putting girls on pedestals.

To be fair he's never going to have the chance to put them anywhere else, at least this way he can look but not touch, win win.

 

[soloooooo]

m8, 1550 words is enough

whole short stories are shorter

Write some new erotica.

 

[Kiraken]

im sure SD will one day find someone

 

[effyhate]

im sure SD will one day find someone

nah

 

[Absolutezero]

lol Shadowdude You're putting girls on pedestals.

*pedalstool

ftfy

 

[Shadowdude]

lol Shadowdude You're putting girls on pedestals.

I believe this particular girl deserves to be placed on such a... place.

To be fair he's never going to have the chance to put them anywhere else, at least this way he can look but not touch, win win.

why you no believe in me

Write some new erotica.

Nah, I prefer wholesome, more emotionally charged opinings over girls I like - rather than physical, explicit descriptions of acts I may never have

im sure SD will one day find someone

we can only hope

 

[Tasteless]

ravage my arsehole bloody

jesus fucking christ shadow

 

[OzKo]

ravage my arsehole bloody

jesus fucking christ shadow

You had me worried with the first line.

 

[Thaler]

This thrad has way too many feelings. Gay.

In other news, because I am blocked from NS for the next two weeks (lol freckle porn) I cannot tell anyone that I have scored an actual date with gorgeous coworker (henceforth known as Laura) and we are going to go to the Royal National Park and go kayaking/bike riding or something. And no, it was my suggestion. (Gay!)