Thesis for Conflicting essay: Justice game. (1 Viewer)

[Tulii]

Currently working on an essay for his module and I think I have a mental issue.

I can't seem to formulate a thesis or scope for my essay. I can't even generate a crappy example in my head.

Can anyone throw a thesis example at me for this statement:

Perspectives of an event, personality or situation may be manipulated by the ways in which a composer represents them.

Please, someone lend me an example of a thesis that can be added/intergrated into this statement?

It doesnt have to be the greatest piece of thesis this word has ever seen. Just anything.

 

[kimlee**]

Composers embed conflicting perspectives in their texts in order to persuade audiences to a particular point of view.

 

[donthaveaname]

Composers embed conflicting perspectives in their texts in order to persuade audiences to a particular point of view.

would that be acceptable for a thesis, or would it be considered too "general"

 

[lychnobity]

would that be acceptable for a thesis, or would it be considered too "general"

NO.

Doesn't cut it.

 

[Aerath]

would that be acceptable for a thesis, or would it be considered too "general"

I believe it does cut it, if you discuss how it is applicable to your texts. ie for me, I used Julius Caesar: "Shakespeare presents conflicting perspectives to show how personal venality often corrupts a society".

 

[dinopoke]

NO.

Doesn't cut it.

Why not? It sounds alright to me.

 

[mishmashmosh]

It should actually be more detailed. Mention WHAT the conflicting perspectives may be, eg, censorship vs freedom of expression

 

[lychnobity]

Why not? It sounds alright to me.

I don't know about you, but that seemed more like an answer to a question, than an actual response. It's not 'thesis' enough. There's no concept of 'how' in it - not articulated enough, therefore, I don't think it cuts it.

It should actually be more detailed. Mention WHAT the conflicting perspectives may be, eg, censorship vs freedom of expression

 

[dog on heat]

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