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[jangbang69]

"His early poem The Sunne Rising inverts the conventions of an aubade, a poem about lovers parting, with hyperbolic symbols of physical love. “This bed, thy center is, these walls, thy sphere” This dramatic conceit of the bedroom as a microcosm of a universe is shown to transcend the Homeric metaphors of time."

How can I reword this to make it sound completely original?
Thanks for help

 

[invisibleears]

ok

 

[jangbang69]

ok

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[slyhunter]

That's good enough?